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Nathaniel Dansereau's avatar

I wish more poems had syllogisms

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alyssa's avatar

syllogisms really are so poetic

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Clarence F. Herdrich's avatar

Gives philosophy of science vibes what with the rationalizing an argument to distinguish parts of the self :) love a good philosophical poem.

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Sakhi Singh's avatar

this is such a wonderful poem!

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alyssa's avatar

thank you so much!!

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Ahsan's avatar

Nothing but logical pain!

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Quiet-Storm's avatar

I like your take on the subject matter.Whether or not you think it's nonsensical, you put some type of light on it in the form of your perspective. All great thoughts start off as nonsensical to someone if not the originator of said thought.

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alyssa's avatar

Wait I love this mindset

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